Wed, 17 Apr 2024 00:43:15 -0400WeeblyMon, 03 Jan 2011 03:10:21 GMThttp://chrystalwynd.com/weekly-emcsa-reviews/reviews-for-stories-posted-01-01-2011Okay, let's start off the new year with a new blog...a review blog. I'm no authority on the subject, so just take it as one man's opinion. What works for me may not work for you, and vice-versa. Or verse-vica, depending on where you're from.

(Note- This is a work in fiction, and I'm still working on the formatting. Please excuse the various HTML symbols...I haven't had a chance to delete them yet.)

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Catty- Chapter 2
By: Cloviewovie
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 Part 2 of Clovie's flagship story, and it's a lot of fun. The girl's hands becoming paws was an inspired idea, and she can't do anything because of them. However, she keeps trying and fighting back the best she can. The guy who's doing this stuff to her really isn't a bad guy, but he's not happy with our protagonist, and for good reason. This story is hot and fun and everything that I love about MC fiction. If a furry story ever occured in Chrystal Heights, it would look a lot like this story. The only real flaw I found was that she shouldn't have been able to remove her bra with those paws. I have two perfectly working hands with opposable thumbs and everything, and I have trouble getting those smarmy bastards off. I can't see a girl with paws- even with her vastly superior experience in taking the damn things off- popping that bad boy off. Still, that's relatively minor. Recommended.

Grade: B

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At My Ex-Girlfriend's Feet
By: nadiencendia
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 If you have a strong foot fetish and love FD w/male sub stories, you should like this one. This is pretty well-written- everything is spelled right and everything- but I can't get into the subject material.  Nothing new here, but she does work him over pretty good, essentially destroying his old life. It's his ex-girlfriend, though, and I have to wonder why she didn't do it when they were actually together. I'll just leave that one to the philosophers, I suppose.

Grade: C

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Doctor Hart's Amusements
By: mzmzed
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Okay, this story is becoming a guilty pleasure for me. It's completely ridiculous- an all-powerful nympho hypno-domme commanding a platoon of male slaves on a mission to reclaim some evidence against her- but the trail she's following to prevent being charged with murder is brilliant.  Some elements of this story are actually quite clever as well. I can't recommend it on quality, but for pure fun...that, I can do. 

Grade: C+

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The Geeks' Girl
By: Tash
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A first-timer, and not bad at all. A geek (male) accidentally turns a fellow geek (female) into a blowjob slut. She doesn't like it, but there's no way around it for her. Interesting story structure...it uses a back-and-forth past/present method. That doesn't usually work for our genre, but it works okay here. I think the hard-ass approach used by George was a bit unlikely, but it did add to the story, so that's a minor thing. Fun story, and should be enjoyed by those who enjoy seeing the geeks win a piece.

Grade: C+

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Let's Have Some Fun
By: John Gray
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Another first-timer. I'm not a fan of god stories, but the writing style is so engaging that this one works. The author is quite funny (think a less-experienced Big Kahuna) and his first-person observations made me laugh out loud several times. The tenses were off on occasion, but the story doesn't take it itself seriously, so it's hard to penalize it for that. It's a positive alphabet soup of codes, so chances are, it's going to hit something you like. On the flip side, it's probably going to hit one of your squicks, too. Regardless, if there's a chapter 2, I'm there. 

Grade: B-


[b]New Year's Babe[/b]
By: [color=red]Lisa Teez[/color]

Definitely not a first-timer here. I love Lisa's holiday themed-stories, and this one is no exception. Cool idea, and well-played out. I [i]love[/i] the ending. Quite clever.

[color=blue]Grade: B[/color]

 
[b]The Prankster's Gift[/b]
By: [color=red]Iron Nick[/color]

Another fun story! The protagonist is called into the office as a suspect for a series of practical jokes, and it turns out the protagonist has just received a gift that makes jokes even better. This is a good, fun, hot story. I love the structure and the jokes. I'm looking forward to more stuff from this author.

[color=blue]Grade: B-[/color]


[b]Triggered[/b]
By: [color=red]Frederick[/color]

Nothing special here, but not a bad story. Geek creates video with subliminal enslaving program. It had me going for a little bit as there seemed to be a mystery about what worked and didn't work, but we never found out what it was. Not super original, but passable.  

[color=blue]Grade: C[/color]


[b]Wage Slaves[/b]
By: [color=red]Jukebox[/color]

As usual, Jukebox refuses to be labeled and he throws us an interesting curveball. A detective breaks up an evil mind-control setup and is interviewing the victims. I love the characterization of the interviewee...very well done. It's Jukebox, so it's quality writing. Recommended.

[color=blue]Grade: B[/color]


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